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ARubberDuckAndNoLuck
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An inspiration to write more

Post by ARubberDuckAndNoLuck » Sat Mar 23, 2013 4:06 pm

Hellooo to anyone who reads this :)

I just felt the need to share a song I have just finished writing today, that started off as a poem. I normally write poems seeing as I have no idea how to 'arrange' a song into versus's and a chorus as such but I love to write and have had writers block for so long that to just get this flash flooding of ideas is just friggin amazing :D I want to say that Green Day, Biffy Clyro and Ofcourse Frank Turner have inspired me so thank you so much :) I normally keep the stuff I write to myself as It's personal and I don't like people knowing whats going on in my mind as I don't know half the time myself. I'm not an Musician and don't claim to be one as I'm not musically talented in anyway unfortunately xD but I will carry on to write despite that. Enough of the rambling though, Here's the song! And feedback on what you think of it would be appreciated a lot.

I’ll kill you with the clouds the way you loved me with your hate

I’ll bite my lips til there sore,
ripping away at the skin on the surface
so I can take my mind off, feeling like this anymore.
The pain it flows through my veins like an unwanted guest
I wish it would just piss off so I can have a moment to rest.

Then you came along and took it all away
but I paid more than the price, more than what it was worth
and our memories float on by
on a cloud up in the sky
I know it will hang over me til I die
but you have to laugh, what else is there to do
in situations like this, when you’re feeling blue.

Something has changed but I don’t know what
I think this is it for us
you’ve forgotten the times we have had
but I’ve not
Now I’ll kill you with the clouds
the way you loved me with your hate
Because there’s not anything left to lose
just the twisted cycle of our fate.

Did I leave my brain on the beach?
So many words I should have spoken and so many things left unsaid
but now there is nothing left in my speech
as we wither slowly away like a dying flower
however with a bit of TLC, this can be fixed
but this time, time seems beyond repair
we flutter on by, in our separate bubbles of despair
nothing left to say, nothing left to hear.

Something has changed but I don’t know what
I think this is it for us
you’ve forgotten the times we have had
but I’ve not
Now I’ll kill you with the clouds
the way you loved me with your hate
Because there’s not anything left to lose
just the twisted cycle of our fate.

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