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by Nico
Sun Jul 21, 2013 8:26 am
Forum: Try This At Home
Topic: Words about music.
Replies: 6
Views: 776

Re: Words about music.

I agree you are very talented !
by Nico
Sun Jul 21, 2013 8:23 am
Forum: Try This At Home
Topic: Be what you believe
Replies: 6
Views: 527

Re: Be what you believe

guess you have a point, whatever the line is not that important it would be no problem to change it
by Nico
Sat Jul 20, 2013 1:33 pm
Forum: Try This At Home
Topic: Poems
Replies: 0
Views: 240

Poems

Hey everyone, I want to show you some poems/songs. It would be cool if someone give me some feedback. Here´s the first one. Neals Song Jack please teach me how to write, I steal cars and sometimes fight, love all women black or white, so lets take pills and drive all night. Where s the old Neil Cass...
by Nico
Fri Jul 19, 2013 11:44 pm
Forum: Try This At Home
Topic: Poem: "How I met your mother"
Replies: 4
Views: 401

Re: Poem: "How I met your mother"

oh, ok thank you, I will put them in one thread in the future. I did not want to spam or something :D
I dont know how to delete my old threads can you tell me how to do it?
by Nico
Fri Jul 19, 2013 12:17 am
Forum: Try This At Home
Topic: Poem: "How I met your mother"
Replies: 4
Views: 401

Poem: "How I met your mother"

How I met your mother It´s okay that we don´t talk, it´s allright but I won´t smile, honey let us take a walk let us be in love a while. I remember your smell, on the 14th of july, I hope you know it well and I hope this ain´t goodbye. I know all the reasons, the hows and the whys, but I just forgot...
by Nico
Thu Jul 18, 2013 6:44 pm
Forum: Try This At Home
Topic: Love Poem
Replies: 3
Views: 377

Re: Love Poem

thank you very much for your feedback =)
by Nico
Thu Jul 18, 2013 6:41 pm
Forum: Try This At Home
Topic: Modern Highway Blues
Replies: 5
Views: 531

Re: Modern Highway Blues

:D ok I think I got it
by Nico
Wed Jul 17, 2013 11:48 pm
Forum: Try This At Home
Topic: Modern Highway Blues
Replies: 5
Views: 531

Re: Modern Highway Blues

Gleena wrote:I really like that.

I grew up in Mississippi and it sounds very twangy in my head, like George Jones or Merle Haggard or something.
thank you very much I don´t know any of those two guys, but I am happy that you like it but what does "twangy" mean? I did not find a good explanation for it
by Nico
Tue Jul 16, 2013 7:22 pm
Forum: Try This At Home
Topic: Modern Highway Blues
Replies: 5
Views: 531

Modern Highway Blues

Hey, here is another song, hope you like it :) Modern Highway Blues I was speedin on the highway and the wind blew mighty strong, the radio played Johnny and his good old country song, then I heard a crashin the next thing I thought was "Wow, my car looked five times better, before I killed that cow...
by Nico
Sun Jul 14, 2013 9:58 am
Forum: Try This At Home
Topic: Love Poem
Replies: 3
Views: 377

Love Poem

Love Poem The day felt right, the sunshine`s bright, it was the perfect time to try, your mouth it formed the words ``good night`` but your cold eyes said: ``goodbye" Your silence is my punishment my words they pricked your pride I´d love to hear your soft accent even if you lied. I know we´ll never...
by Nico
Fri Jul 12, 2013 6:11 pm
Forum: Try This At Home
Topic: Be what you believe
Replies: 6
Views: 527

Re: Be what you believe

true :D
by Nico
Fri Jul 12, 2013 10:37 am
Forum: Try This At Home
Topic: Be what you believe
Replies: 6
Views: 527

Re: Be what you believe

yeah, you are right I am a huge bob dylan fan
I am no racist, the whole second verse is a bit ironic( like the ice age line), I imagined a very old man speaking the lines, with out dated values some kind of naysayer
by Nico
Fri Jul 12, 2013 1:34 am
Forum: Try This At Home
Topic: Be what you believe
Replies: 6
Views: 527

Be what you believe

Hey everyone, here´s another song/poem. I hope you like it. Be what you believe Will this be a biggie or another boring track? Will the sky stay brightly or will it turn to black? Will you be a winner or another old sad sack? Will the wind of changes blow or will we be thrown back? Will you live wit...
by Nico
Fri Jul 12, 2013 1:24 am
Forum: Try This At Home
Topic: Song to Jim
Replies: 7
Views: 425

Re: Song to Jim

And thank you very much. I am very happy for the nice comments :)
by Nico
Fri Jul 12, 2013 1:20 am
Forum: Try This At Home
Topic: Song to Jim
Replies: 7
Views: 425

Re: Song to Jim

yes it is because the apostrophe is missing